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A weekend getaway goes sour even before the corpses start accruing in “Trespassers,” a good-looking indie thriller that’s diverting, but could have used another script draft or two.
Jul 10, 2019 · A weekend getaway goes sour even before the corpses start accruing in “Trespassers,” a good-looking indie thriller that’s diverting, but could have used another script draft or two....
Trespassers. Two couples, each working through relationship issues, rent a gorgeous house in the desert for a sex- and drug-fueled escape from reality. As tensions escalate throughout a ...
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- Angela Trimbur
- Orson Oblowitz
- Horror, Mystery & Thriller
A weekend getaway goes sour even before the corpses start accruing in “Trespassers,” a good-looking indie thriller that’s diverting, but could have used another script draft or two.
- Keep Title Pages Simple
- Only Use Fade in and Fade Out at The Beginning and End of Your Script
- Little to No Camera Directions
- Dialogue Never Follows The Slug Line
- All New Notable Character Names Need to Be in Caps The First Time They Appear
- Scene Description Is Not For Background
- Dialogue Is Not For Exposition
- Cut to Transitions Are Useless in Screenplays
- It’S Not Your Job to Dictate Where Actors Should Improvise
- Use “We See” Few and Far Between
Studios and companies don’t need or want too much information on the title page. It’s the 21st century. They don’t need your mailing address, home phone number, cell phone number, and pager number (you may laugh, but it happens). Chances are your query was sent through email. If they want your contact information beyond that email address, they’ll ...
Too many novice screenwriters use FADE IN and FADE OUT transitions — and variations thereof — throughout the whole script as stylistic camera or editing directions (more on that later). That’s not what those transitions are for. FADE IN is the first text on the first line of your script (the beginning). FADE OUT — or FADE TO BLACK — is for the end ...
Things like CAMERA PULLS BACK, WE ZOOM IN, CAMERA DOLLIES RIGHT, EXTREME CLOSE-UP, and other camera directions have no place in a spec script (script written under speculation that it will be sold and produced). Screenwriters often read scripts directed by auteurs like Quentin Tarantino, the Coen Brothers, and Paul Thomas Anderson. You surely will ...
Another common mistake occurs when screenwriters write their slug line/location heading and then immediately follow that with dialogue (and accompanying character names). This should never happen. Whenever you move into another location, there has to be at least one line of scene description between the slug line/location heading and the dialogue (...
When a new character appears, you have to cue the reader to their first appearance by putting their name in CAPS that first time. This is generally saved only for characters that have dialogue or are prevalent to the story. A passerby that doesn’t have a line and doesn’t have anything to do with the story (likely only appearing in one scene), doesn...
It’s a common cheat for screenwriters to use the scene description to explain away story elements, character history, and background. Screenplays are a visual medium. You are tasked with telling the story cinematically through visual actions, reactions, and audible dialogue. If it’s not going to be on the screen, you can’t include it within your sc...
Expositionis defined as “a comprehensive description and explanation of an idea or theory.” In screenplay context, it’s information that is communicated through dialogue explaining either what has already been described within the screenplay (redundant) or what has clearly happened off screen. Expositional dialogue is the worst kind of dialogue — a...
Forget what you’ve seen in the screenplays you’ve read from older classics. The transition CUT TO between scenes is overly redundant because once we move from one new scene or location to the next, we obviously CUT TO that next one (with minor exceptions). There’s no need to waste important screenplay real estate by typing CUT TO in between every —...
A common annoyance in screenplays occurs when the screenwriter uses the scene description to tell us that characters are engaged in small talk, are talking on the phone, or that actors portraying those characters are tasked to improvise. Again, everything within the screenplay needs to communicate what is going to be seen or heard onscreen — thus, ...
When you’re writing scene description, it’s okay to use “we see” as a way to communicate an image or action every now and then. We see the shadow of the shark within the water. When it’s in a majority of scene description blocks, it’s overbearing. We see the shark’s fin penetrate the water. Brody rushes to the side of the boat. We see the fin turn ...
Common terms and definitions used in Film Production & Screenwriting such as spec script, shooting script (final draft), intercut, voice over and pov.
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Jun 23, 2021 · When revising your script, be sure to identify and question your primary conflict. Could it be stronger? Could the stakes be raised in some way to heighten the drama?
